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Rubbish Dumped [The Original Story's Concept] (By Kite)
The Original Rubbish Dumped Storyline by Kite
1. 杨旭光
1.1. Working at fast food restaurant, NS enlistee; has lots of friends.
1.2. Wooing 1st suspect Long Qi Yu
1.3. Quite close with 1st victim Long Jun Hong (Long Jun Yee)
1.4. Volunteer for disabled home
1.5. 2nd Victim, first to be discovered
1.5.1. Injuries found on his body
1.5.2. lots of bruises and death caused by stab at the heart from the back
1.5.3. Right thigh has a stab
1.5.4. Chin out of place (so banged by something heavy)
1.5.5. Banged table (Jaw out of place), so too painful to struggle.
1.5.6. Murderer pick up the knife, stabs him on his back
1.5.7. Died on spot, murderer then dumped body with the rubbish.
2. 龙俊宏(龙俊一)
2.1. Uni student, does not have much friends
2.2. Elder Brother of 1st suspect, Long Qi Yu(Long Qi Yee)
2.3. Quite close with 2nd victim Yang Xu Guang
2.4. Volunteer for disabled home
2.5. Jun Hong takes very good care of Qi Yu
2.6. always takes part time job to afford their schooling fees
2.7. recently, Jun Hong comes home late and sometimes found drunk at their house’s living room
2.8. Qi Yu spot something amiss, but dare not interrupt her brother’s relationship thing
2.9. 1st Victim, 2nd to be discovered
2.9.1. Injuries found on his body
2.9.2. lots of bruises
2.9.3. Death caused by major hit at the back of his head
2.9.4. Drink was spiked. Since guys are easily coaxed by girls into drinking.
2.9.5. The Woman sort of kidnaps him.
2.9.6. Then torture him in some unknown place, before killing him.
2.9.7. Body is left there.
2.9.8. When dumping the 2nd body(Yang Xu Guang), she decided to dump the 1st body too.
2.9.9. This explains the time difference.
2.9.10. Because she is reminded of the first body, the more frequent she sees the first body.
2.9.11. The murderer was so scared she dumped the body.
3. 龙崎雨 (龙琦一)
3.1. JC student, does not have friends
3.2. Usually overstressed and often visits the counselor
3.3. Younger sister of 1st victim Long Jun Hong
3.4. target to woo of 2nd victim Yang Xu Guang
3.5. Qi Yu and Jun Hong have a broken family.
3.6. They follow their father as their mother ran away from home
3.7. Father is failed business man turned to gambler
3.8. 1st suspect
3.8.1. Qi Yu was released because C.I.D do not have much evidence of the case, but they sent spy on her
3.8.2. Then maybe something in her house spoilt, so she asks the 3rd victim to help her fix.
3.8.3. Maybe is the pipe or something else spoilt?
3.8.4. But 3rd victim wants to take advantage of her
3.8.5. Maybe in the toilet cause toilet connected to Kitchen
3.8.6. Qi Yu screams and runs out to the kitchen
3.8.7. One kitchen knife fell, she grabbed it, the 3rd victim pound on her, so is killed.
3.8.8. since the police tailed her, they heard her scream so they ran in, and caught her red handed.
3.8.9. So police thought she’s the murderer of all three guys
4. 叶军殴
4.1. 3rd victim (accidentally killed by Qi Yu)
4.2. Working at same fast food restaurant as Xu Guang
4.3. Volunteer for disabled home
4.4. Have liked Qi Yu for sometime.
5. True Murderer(Unnamed)
5.1. Female
5.2. Elder sister of a disabled in the disabled home the guys volunteered in.
5.3. Her brother is often bullied by Yang Xu Guang and Long Jun Hong.
5.4. So she wants to revenge.
Editor: Guess I did "mutate" her story by quite a bit ya? Haha. If you are submitting your stories to me, be prepared to be axed or "mutated" beyond recognition ya? No offence though, haha.
Could I kindly have a little long break? Haha. School's getting busy, and examinations are approaching. My exams end 5May, but wont be free till after Vesak Day, and many of you are having Mid Year Exams then, so MetaC will continue after you guys' exams. Post will continue on 24/05/2008. Meanwhile I will entertain you guys with UVid-Its. I will try to make it possible for 2posts per week when I resume in May. Let's all take a break and concentrate on our studies ok? Cheerios!
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